I wonder what I should right on this page? There’s a riverbed next to my house I have never seen the riverbed so dry. I don’t know why the river bed is so dry. I think some people sucked out the water with toobs and stuff. It was so beautiful. I used to fish in the riverbed but now it’s gone. I want to bring the riverbed back so day after day I put water in the dry river. Now I find the guys who did this will go to jail for properti damage.
Hello Ryan,
Your story made good use of the prompt phrase, “…I have never seen the river bed so dry…”. It’s one I might have considered for the Showcase. Well done.
One tip, the prompt you used was for Week #4. Week #5 used a picture.
Ross Mannell (Team 100WC)
Teacher (retired), N.S.W., Australia