Week #5

I wonder what I should right on this page? There’s a riverbed next to my house  I have never seen the riverbed so dry. I don’t know why the river bed is so dry. I think some people sucked out the water with toobs and stuff. It was so beautiful. I used to fish in the riverbed but now it’s gone.  I want to bring the riverbed back so day after day I put water in the dry river. Now I find the guys who did this will go to jail for properti damage.

One thought on “Week #5

  1. Hello Ryan,
    Your story made good use of the prompt phrase, “…I have never seen the river bed so dry…”. It’s one I might have considered for the Showcase. Well done.
    One tip, the prompt you used was for Week #4. Week #5 used a picture.
    Ross Mannell (Team 100WC)
    Teacher (retired), N.S.W., Australia

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